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Lonely Sun
#11
Eh bien cette suite est tr?s int?ressante !

Quote:j'ai peur que le style ait un peu perdu le niveau initial

non T'inqui?te pas ! bravo

J'aime bien les d?tails qui font r?alistes et science-fiction :

Quote:yellow sonic shower --> un classique ! wink
quarter past 27
By chance, Milrock was just nine jundred kilometres away
etc.

Bizarre cette fille, Senare, qui a disparu... :?
Aurait-elle succomb?
:?: Au c?t? obscur ?
:?: A des intrigues politiciennes ?
:?: Aux aliens de l'espace ?
:?: A un virus extraterrestre ?
:?: Aux charmes d'un beau m?decin ?
(barrer les mentions inutiles cobra )

Bon alors mon choix pour cette fois...

[roulement de tambour]
Chilperic Chilperic Chilperic

Big_Band

arrow Mind and body co-ordination : ?33 !

: bananevert:
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#12
Si vous saviez la nombre d'heures de boulots que ce truc me damande! :roll: Bon, la suite est fin prête et corrigée biggrin mais hélas, c'est Anlor qui en a la seule copie :( cry . Bon je la recupère dès que je peut pour la mettre sur le forum, mais ce WE ça va être de la folie twisted : il me faut en moyenne deux heures pour écrire une seule page, et il m'en reste au bas mot un trentaine à écrire :shock: à condition de faire de terribles productor's cut evil . La branche du choix 'computers' va sauter! :? Il faut que ça soit fini Lundi! :shock: :( cry :x
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#13
Ca y est! J'ai récupéré la suite! Big_Band
Attention, c'est super long! sommeil Mais bon, l'action commence et les ennuis arrivent Kopikol !

Bonne lecture! Teach


33.
'Oh really! Very well Mr Antekril, it's something few people have the courage to learn nowadays. You will be part of my shift. You, miss Cyrlaniel, will join the second one, and you, Mr Utalubro, will join the third one. Does anyone have any request before we board the ship?’
‘I have one,’ said a pretty young red-haired girl with an accent of the front sector. 'I need additional room for my instruments, because cybernetic needs many of them.'
'I think you'll have enough room to put your three bags.' answered the first officer.
'Yes, but I have a fourth one. I left it in my room hoping that someone would help me carry it.'
'Mr Zeen, you seem to have the two smallest bags of the shift, could you share some space with miss Caelin?'
'No, I'm sorry. I carry fragile technical items. I cannot pile them up.'
'So, I'm sorry miss Caelin, but you cannot bring another bag. Just take what's most important.'
The girl looked really annoyed but there was nothing she could do. We took place on a small cargo boarder and everyone dropped his or her luggage in the back of the vehicle. Mr Zeen carefully put his bags on the top of the pile. I sat near the captain and his first pilot, Lilia Starp. There were also the three other observers who joined the first shift. They were Teebow Tery, whom I had already met, Sarcum Cushgrac, a tribun who represented the interests of the population in this expedition, and Thalia Niquarel, a biologist. The captain addressed us.
‘Since you are part of the first shift, my shift, I expect you to have an exemplar behaviour. Lilia will show you your quarters and each of you will receive two new uniforms. Unpack quickly! Just make sure that all your stuff is tied to a hook or in a closed drawer or closet so it doesn’t fly anywhere because of the changes in gravity. I want everyone to be there by the beginning of the warming up last sequence. Does anyone have any question?’
There was no question, or if there was, no one dared ask.
Solar Wind was looking like a ring lying on the floor. There were hundreds of technicians with their bee-like suits moving and working all around her. The closer we got to her the more the noise grew. I noticed that the great armoured roof was open. The only protection between the void and us was the tainted crystal canopy. The shinning trees were closed so the light came from the space and the machines around the ship. It seemed to me we were entering a middle-age magical factory.
We entered the ship through an airlock with an access ramp. We took a large corridor that run along the whole ring. Smaller ones branched from the main corridor and allowed access to the different parts of the ship.
‘As you certainly have noticed, we are walking on the wall,’ told us the captain. ‘During the flight, the ship’s rotation will provide an artificial gravity, which will slowly increase to make our organism get used to living on a planet such as Andromeda delta D317TR17. The gravity there is twice as strong as Lonely Sun’s. Yet, for the present, Solar Wind is still, lying on the ground, so we’ll have to climb up and down the lateral corridors, and get across open doors.’
‘It’s not going to be easy captain,’ said Teebow, ‘we all are carrying encumbering bags’.
‘Don’t worry, the walls, floor and roof are made in a special adhesive material so you can grip it easily,’ said Lilia.
With a few acrobatic moves, we eventually reached our quarters. We were two per room and Teebow was my roommate. Lilia left us to go to the control room and begin the warming up. We had just tied our bags when a security officer came to us with a big suitcase and asked ‘Are you Lian the writer and Teebow the ecology engineer?’ We introduced ourselves.
‘Here are your new uniforms!’ he said, opening the suitcase.
I got two grey uniforms with the symbol of the exploration department, a satellite orbiting a planet. Teebow received two blue ones, the colour of the science department. They were made in a special tissue to improve our grip on the walls.
‘May your feet bear you along colourful paths!’ said Teebow to the man when he got out.
‘Uh…yes! Thank you!’
‘Why in the name of all Zaerin’s stars have they chosen the blue colour for the science department! I hate this colour, but, everywhere I go, they give me a blue suit!’ he burst after the man had gone.
‘Well, I guess they had to chose a colour. Hurry up! We should not be late for our first day on board.’
We got dressed, unpacked as fast as we could, and climbed up to the main corridor. There we met other members of our shift. They were Zeeho Wood, the medical officer, and Ygp Gaelmetraesil, the engineering officer. They were waiting before a swift-lift door.
‘Why didn’t we use that instead of walking?’ I asked.
‘It does not go everywhere in the ship. There are only ten stops and none of them is close to an airlock, because in case of emergency you should not use a swift-lift,’ answered the navigator.
The door opened with no sound and we entered the tainted crystal cabin.
‘Hang on, it’s quite fast!’ said the engineer officer loudly.
I suddenly felt stuck against the wall. It was a fast one indeed! For a few seconds I could see the inner side of the ship through opened shield accesses. There were three arms holding the ring together and a kind of cylinder with a spherical shield on the front part. The arms were larger near the ring than next to the cylinder. I could see, just below us, the great sail folded in its compartment. I assumed It could be spread between the ring and the cylinder.
The door opened and we entered a large cylindrical room, which, contrary to the rest of the ship, didn't lie on its side. There was a mechanical system that let the room take the good position in relation to the gravity field. There were many seats, computers, screens, interface hoods and little lights shinning everywhere. Yet, there were neither sharp angle nor boring colours. The light came from the walls, floor and roof and was neither too bright nor too dark. The captain was sitting in his seat on the rostrum in the back of the room. There were two additional seats, one on his right and one on his left. I guessed they were the first and second officer’s seats. The main holo-screen was on the opposite wall. Just before the screen was the pilot consol. It looked like a great desk with lots of buttons, control pads and lights, and small screens. There were two seats. Lilia, the first pilot, was sitting there; she was already wearing her interface hood. Behind her, on the left, was the science station, and on the right was the navigator’s station. Then there were two rows of five additional seats without no special equipment but interface hoods.
'At last!' exclaimed the captain. 'Ygp, hurry up! Take a seat and assist Lilia for the warming up, we may have to make it quicker than we thought.'
'What’s the matter captain?' asked the medical officer while the engineering officer took a seat and put his interface hood on.
'Lonely Sun's core survey team has just given us a warning. Peusil is on the spot. We shall know soon what's happening.' The Science officer was sitting at his post, wearing his interface hood. He seemed to be doing a great effort in concentration. The captain gently looked at his medical officer and said, 'I assume your here to take your orders.'
'Yes, is there anything I should particularly pay attention to?'
'Well, I don't think so. Just go to the medical bay and make sure everything is operational. There's no new item or anything you're not used to.'
'Alright sir, may your feet bear you along colourful paths.'
'And the stars shine in your eyes.' Then the captain looked at us. ' Miss Niquarel, you should go with doctor Wood, you'll certainly be very useful there. The others have a seat and witness the operation. We'll ask you to help us when needed.'
I sat in the middle of the second row. The tribun was on my right and Teebow was on my left. Before us the engineering officer has put his interface hood on. Suddenly the science officer came back to reality, took off his hood and addressed the captain.
'Captain, I have bad news! Type C instabilities have been spotted in Lonely Sun's magnetic field. They are not yet of important scale but their progression is worrying. The Core specialist told me that has already happened without catastrophic consequences...yet, we've checked the outburst temperature in the fusion wells with another specialist and I have a very bad feeling about all this.'
'What do you mean?'
'Well, contrary to what the specialist said, I'm almost certain that this is no controlled phenomena. The core has been almost reaching its critical point for years. Those instabilities may be the premises of the magnetic inversion.'
'It's impossible, this phenomena has happened only once or twice in the whole ship’s lifetime.'
'Trust me captain, it's been a very long time since it last happened, and the core survey team has been giving more and more warnings for ten years. It may not happen this time but if it does, the field would collapse, exposing Lonely Sun to cosmic wind. The closing of emergency shields would trap us in for months. That would be the end of the expedition'
The captain remained silent for a few seconds, his head low, struggling with his thoughts. Then he looked straight into his science officer's eyes as if wanted to read in his mind how certain he was of what he said. He eventually addressed his engineering officer.
' Ygp, how far along is the warming up?'
'The first sequence is in progress. There are around five minutes left. Then there are three other sequences of half an hour.'
'Peusil, if you're right, if the magnetic shield is about to invert, how much time do we have before it collapses?'
'Since we have very few records of such an event, I can hardly estimate. We might have from fifty minutes to several hours, depending of how the instability develop.'
'How many sequences are essential before we take off, Ygp?'
'Three are needed to make our fusion reactor independent. Until then all our power come from Lonely Sun. Then there are the take off sequences. Yet it can be very dangerous to skip too many of them. '
'How can we reduce that delay?'
'Well, we could try to complete the fusion sequences in fifteen minutes each, but the ship would have only a quarter of its power during take-off. The system checking sequence could be just initiated and completed in orbit of the mother ship.'
'Alright! Lian, explain the situation to the port master and tell him I put forward the take off to half past seventeen. The take off sequences shall begin at seventeen o'clock. Tribun Cusgrac, you should ask permission to make an emergency take off in case the instability progress faster than we think from the exploration department. I'll warn my first and second officers.'
The second fusion sequence began. We all were siting on edge. The second pilot, Saazen Enam, and the first engineer, Irkael Gehliom, had arrived quickly, and helped Lilia and Ygp. First officer Peak came and sat on the captain’s right and the first and second navigator came and checked their computers. Yet, every two minutes the science officer received bad news from the core survey team. The instability developed at too important a pace. At twenty to seventeen, the second fusion sequence ended, it had lasted only fifteen minutes, and the last one was initiated. Two minutes later, the core survey team confirmed a chain reaction had taken place, and the magnetic field was going to invert. The technical crews on the ground were withdrawing, so an emergency take-off could be attempted if needed. The only technicians left wore armoured space suits. At thirteen to seventeen the science officer suddenly took off his hood and turned back to face the captain and us.
'The magnetic field is about to collapse!'
'Engineering report' calmly said the captain.
'Third fusion sequence is in progress, eight minutes to completion. Check-up sequence is in progress. No failure has been detected by now. Yet only basic life support systems and computers are operational,' answered Ygp.
'That's far enough,' declared the captain. 'Initiate the take-off sequence. The sooner we take off the better.'
Our light turned blue and the giant doors of the port slowly closed down. Then the air around Solar Wind began to be blown out. Because the inner communication system was not yet fully operational, the only person we could reach to warn her of what was happening was the second officer Kishin. I assumed she would warn the other ones. Six minutes later, the port alarm call informed us that the magnetic shield was collapsing.
'Tell them to wait before closing the shields! Tell them we are attempting an emergency take off!,' shouted the captain.
'Sir! There's more than one minute left before they can remove the energy cables!' said the engineering officer.
'Tell them to remove all other cables and open the canopy. We'll remove the energy cables manually from the inside. I'll take care off it. Mael, take the command of the control room! I need someone to help me, who thinks he can deal with it?'

To follow the captain go to 15
To stay in the control room go to 35

Eh bien Nico, quel est ton choix? Yuck
La suite est déjà écrite, donc il n'y aura pas de temps d'attente : baille: , mais comme ce soir je rentre chez moin je risque de ne pas repasser lire les topics avant quelques temps Boulet3 .

Pour information, le livre fait déjà 108 pages.
Gne
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#14
Applause et mille fois Applause !
bravo2

Je vais m'atteler à la lecture, tel le nuage de sauterelles dévorant les récoltes ! lol

Banane : bananeorange:
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#15
dis nico tu pourrais me faire une petite impression du texte de matthieu!!!
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#16
Euh ce serait volontiers, mais là on va arriver à cours d'encre et je vais avoir besoin du reste pour mes papiers de maîtrise.

Je vais faire mon possible. smile
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#17
Bon, je crois qu'Antékril n'est pas un paidai, [Image: paidai.gif] donc il va suivre le Capitaine.

arrow §15

Par contre, je suis pas sûr d'avoir tout compris à ce §. Je vais le relire plus attentivement. Teach

Mais sinon, ça roolz toujours ! bravo
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#18
soit dit en passant ce n'est pas non plus un technicien qualifié :? , mais bon, là ça ne porte pas à conséquence smile . Je n'aime pas les choix qui te font perdre dès la début. :roll:

Allez, chose promise chose due, voici le numero 15 twisted

15.
'I’ll go with you, sir!' I immediately said.
'I expected no less from you, Lian! Follow me.'
We rushed into the second swift lift. The captain programmed our destination. The acceleration of the swift lift stuck me against the wall while the captain managed to grip the opposite one.
'Lian, it seems your training will begin sooner than we thought. Since I cannot teach you the whole manual disconnection procedure in one minute, you'll have to precisely synchronise your moves with mine. Yet you must not act as if you were my mirror image. You must do the same gesture with the same hand as I do.'
The blue light suddenly turned red.
'Don't worry, Lian! We are almost there.'
The door opened and I noticed that its airlock was closed. It took us a few precious seconds to open this. We started to run along the main corridor. Every door was closed so we didn't have to jump across them. The captain eventually stopped and opened one of the airtight doors. Once more we were loosing very precious time, yet I admired the captain’s calm, which let him accomplish his task as quickly as one could. We began to climb down a technical corridor, but I had trouble keeping up with him. He looked like a purple spider creeping fast on his net, whereas I certainly had more in common with the prey stuck in it. The more I struggled with the walls and my new suit, the less my moves were efficient.
'Don't panic Lian! Keep your self-confidence! Just don't struggle with your grip. Make larger moves, put your whole body against the wall and slide along. It's a bit like swimming. Each move have to be coordinated by your mind. Think your body, and think your move, Lian!'
As I had learned when I was a child, I extended my perception to my whole body, felt nearly each muscle and went forth. We took a small access pipe, and entered a small space filled with cables, energy distributors and electronic devices. The captain headed to a mechanical control panel, and designated two twin manual control.
'Take this one and do exactly what I do.'
It was a very difficult exercise of concentration. Probably the hardest I had ever done. I completely forgot my being, I was him. My arms were doing exactly what his were doing, as if his spirit controlled them, as if we where the same being. I could almost predict his move just by seeing his current position. The whole work just took us a few seconds, then the harmony vanished.
'You are gifted, Lian! No one could have managed this without training. The cable is detached, but there are two others left and ...'
He didn't finish his sentence. The ship began to shake and a roar rose from the depths of the machinery. Captain Thyl rushed out and I followed him as fast as I could.
'Wise Metheus! We'll have to catch the gold shooting star!' He whispered. We were running and climbing, breathless. We reached another access pipe and opened it. Yet we felt the ship was taking off for good now.
'We wont have enough time to detach both cables left!' panted the captain.
'I'll take care of this one on my own! Go and detach the other,' I answered between two breaths.
'No, It's very hard even for an engineer.'
'We have no choice!'
I crawled into the pipe and made it through to the manual control panel. The captain had not followed me so I thought he was going to detach the third cable. I switched my mind in extended consciousness. I perfectly remembered every move of the precedent operation, and I could do exactly the same. Yet, nobody was doing the same on the second control panel, so I took one or two seconds to organise my actions. This was a succession of define sequences, I just had to complete one sequence on the first control panel and then do the same on the second one. My gestures were even faster than the first time. I rushed from one panel to the other and back. I did one mistake and lost one second to undo that. It was like a bit like reciting a text you've learn by heart at full speed. Suddenly a heavy shake pushed me down, and a sinister creak came from the ship’s structure. The cable was tight and held the ship. I jumped onto the control panel and executed the last operation as fast I my muscles could move, turned to the second control panel, while another creak rang through the room, and did the same actions. The ship was partially released and I was cast against the floor. A second move came just a few seconds later, and the acceleration flattened me against the wall. I didn't manage to return to normal mind sensibility in time so the blow made me lose consciousness.
I woke up on a bed in the medical bay. I was naked under the soft sheet, and I quickly felt the disorientation of weightlessness. I and the sheet were being held against the bed by three straps.
'How do you feel, Lian?' asked a sweet girl voice. Thalia was standing next to the bed and looking at me.
'I don't know. Well not so bad indeed. What happened?'
'You and the captain managed to disconnect the power cables in time and Solar Wind is orbiting around her mother ship. We found you near the manual control panel. You had neither special seat nor hammock to soften the initial acceleration. So we proceed to...' she blushed for one second, 'to a complete exam of your medical status.'
'What about the captain?'
'He has already recovered from the blow. I told me to send you to him as soon as you would wake. I think he is in his room.'
I looked all around me, and eventually asked embarrassed 'Where are my clothes?'
'I go and bring them,' she answered laughing.
The captain was waiting for me. He greeted me as one do with a close friend, and said he was very proud of me. He offered me a closed cup of balawe with a drinking straw, and told me I had almost saved the expedition by detaching the second cable on my own. I said he did the same with the third, but he smiled at me and simply answered 'I'm the captain. Anyway, it was your idea.' Then he took a small chest and gave it to me.
'What is this?'
'Open it, Lian. It's the greatest proof of confidence a captain can give.'
I opened the chest and found a small optical key.
'That's the key of my personal armoured space suit. If anything happens to me, come here and take it.'

Go to 5.

vous remarquerez que j'ai renoncé à toute mise en page :shock: mais bon j'avais la flemme de la refaire 8)

La suite est déjà disponible mais j'aime bien faire attendre un peu Wink
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#19
Merci d'avoir déjà envoyé la suite ! biggrin
J'aurai pas le temps de le lire maintenant, mais ça ne saurait tarder. Wink
:roll:

Quote:soit dit en passant ce n'est pas non plus un technicien qualifié   :?

Euh... Whistle j'ai po compris ce que tu voulais dire. :(
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warning heavy part detected :oops: :oops:

c'est long mais c'est bon (du moins je l'espère)

5.
Lian’s informal log, day three of the expedition.
Ship repairs are under way, and our fusion reactor is already fully operational. We still receive some news from Lonely Sun. Their heavy emergency shields are closed and cosmic winds make radio communications difficult. The great cargo ship which has arrived yesterday is still in orbit. The mithrillium she gave us has been very useful to repair our damaged hull. She had a full load of it. She is called Tree Nebula, and has left Lonely Sun for two thousand years in order to go and collect the precious alloy. Yet, because of relativity effects, the crew has been in space for only fifteen years. Her ecosystem is far more important than ours, thus she can be independent for many years. Staying outside of the mother ship is not a problem to us, but smaller ship-range spaceships have required our assistance. Tree Nebula has taken most of the endangered crew in. We have learned that tomorrow, Lonely Sun will activate a local magnetic shield on one of her harbour and open the emergency shields to take in the smallest ships.
I switched off my notepad and put it back in the drawer. I caught the pen flying above my hammock, and put it in my pocket, but my moves weren't well co-ordinated so the hammock began to turn upside down. I gripped the wall and returned to a normal position looking forward to our departure and the rotation, which would provide the artificial gravity. Weightlessness may seem funny but after three days of flying objects it can get very boring. It was my resting time. Because of the repairs, we were working fifteen hours a day, and we were so exhausted after such a day that we slept thirteen hours straight. For the moment, I was a kind of local hero, every one was being nice to me especially Thalia, the young biologist. It was quite embarrassing. I rolled up in my hammock and hoped Teebow wouldn't read long so he would switch the light off.
When I woke up, the first thing I noticed was that the ship had begun to move, creating variations in gravity. Our apparent floor was the same wall than when we were aboard Lonely Sun. Teebow woke up soon after.
'What's going on?'
'I think we are flying out of Lonely Sun’s influence.'
Gravity was at a very low level. We still felt the weightlessness around us. I carefully jumped from my hammock, and fell very, very slowly on the floor. I looked at the clock on the wall. It was almost time for us to get up anyway. We decided to have a good sonic shower, get dressed and go have breakfast in the common room. I rolled my dirty clothes into a ball and put them in a bag. I would put all this in the washing machine that night.
We met some other crew members in the common kitchen. Some of them belonged to our shift, the captain’s shift, the others were part of the second shift. We joined Thalia and Lilia who were cooking some graeltru with lemon. The first meal is the most important of the day, I remembered, I should eat something substantial, and the gaeltru smells so good... What was boring on the ship was the lack of solid food. Because of weightlessness we all were condemned to eat soup all day long.
'The morning light shine upon your soul!' Lilia greeted us.
'Your heart open to receive its blessing! Would you mind if we joined you for breakfast?' asked Teebow.
'It would be my pleasure! Just ask for more potatoes and carrots.'
'Lian, could you get us some warm balawe? I think Fush, the medical assistant of the second team, left a full balawe pot in the small oven,' added Thalia.
We sat, fastened our seatbelts and began eating. Lilia, our pilot, explained us that our current manoeuvre was very simple, only the directional reactors were fired, to make our course around Lonely Sun more and more elliptic, until our trajectory became parabolic. I didn't understand all of her explanation. That was a bit too complicated for me. Lilia was a thin, small woman with bronzed skin, dark lively eyes and short dark hair. She was wearing her deep purple suit, the colour of the command department. She was around forty I thought, so she was still young and quick. Compared to her, Thalia looked like a little girl. She was only 26, one year younger than I. She was granted majority just two weeks before we left, yet she already had an important post in the medical research organisation. She had to be a genius. She had a pale skin, deep blue eyes and long auburn hair, which contrasted with her light green suit. She was tall for a girl, around one point ninety five metres, just twelve centimetres less than I.
Then, we received a call from the captain saying the first shift had to take its watch. We quickly finished our balawe and reported in. I went to the control room and took a seat. Lilia sat to her post where the third pilot was working, and put her hood on. The two navigators seemed to be working very hard on their big holo-map. One of them eventually turned back to face the captain and said the course had been plotted.
'Engage the main propulsion particles accelerator!' ordered captain Thyl. The light turned blue and we fastened our seatbelts. The main holo-screen showed us the front view of the ship. Staring at the faraway stars I didn't pay attention to the succession of orders and confirmations until I heard the captain ordering:
'Crown ignition!'
At once, I felt the acceleration. Yet the stars didn't seem to move because of their great distance. The reactive lasers were firing more and more often and the nearest meteorites seemed to accelerate. Now we were gone for good!

Lian’s informal log, day nine of the expedition.
Our acceleration got us back to Lonely Sun's gravity level. The last physical troubles caused by this brutal change in weight have disappeared. The stars in front of us gradually change in colour. They are getting bluer, while the stars behind us are getting redder. The meteorites we encounter now seem to be flat. The ship has begun to rotate so we are expecting a progressive shift in gravity direction. Our reactive lasers are working at the maximum of their abilities. If we don't find a clearer area we'll have to stop our acceleration.

Lian’s informal log, day twenty-two of the expedition.
We have slowed our acceleration as planned. Now, the rotation is the main source of gravity, so our apparent ground is now the ship’s floor. The blue shift has moved some blue stars spectres almost out of visible range. It's quite amazing to see giant stars shining like very little ones. The captain assigned us some routine tasks and said the observers’ training should begin soon. He told me that he will train me himself. I think he looks upon me as his son or his heir.

Lian’s informal log, day thirty-one of the expedition.
We stopped the propulsion reactor and began free flight.
We are back on our course after yesterday’s step aside to avoid a small comet. My tasks and training leave me spare time enough to read and play spherical chess with tribun Cushgrac and Thalia. They are pretty good players. I wish I had real books, but there’s not enough room on the ship, so I can only read books with optical chips on a computer screen.

Lian’s informal log, day forty-six of the expedition.
The flip-around manoeuvre was a success. After one hour of dramatic gravity changes in the ship, everything came back to a normal state. Our reactors are now facing our destination. We are going to propel slowly Solar Wind until she closes enough to use the sail and take us into orbit around the planet.

Lian’s informal log, day sixty of the expedition.
We are still decelerating, no problem has been spotted by now but the strange angle of the gravity direction. We all are walking bent aside. Each day, one of our scientists gives us a little conference to expose his work and teaches us the basics of his or her domain. Today Teebow told us about the groundless ecosystem used in our ship. You cannot imagine how complex it is. Yet, the complexity is the guarantee of its hardiness.

Lian’s informal log, day seventy-four of the expedition.
The blue and red shifts are very diminished. The stars behind and before us have almost their true colours. Gravity keeps increasing so it will reach the planet level in three weeks. It very hard for me to get used to such a weight to bear and such fast fall when we jump or cast something. Yet, it’s only the beginning. Anyway, the captain told me he was very proud of my results to the co-ordination test.

Lian’s informal log, day eighty-nine of the expedition.
We have gone past the planet and stopped. We are now between the planet and the star, so we can use the sail. The third and second shifts will deploy it during our resting time. If everything is right, we’ll reach the planet in four days of navigation. It would have been too dangerous to use our particle accelerator near the planet and its satellites, because they all have a magnetic field, so the reactions of our plasma would have been too unpredictable.

Lian’s informal log, day ninety-three of the expedition.
Our pilots have successfully set us into orbit around the planet… well, the name was definitely too complicated, and as we were the first explorers here, we could choose a more simple name. I could remember the image of the planet on the main holo-screen. It was a little blue spot in the dark and cold ocean of the void. Sapphire was already a planet name, as well as Opal. There were so many blue planets. Maybe the simplest name had not already been used? Blue Island would do well. I would check it out with the captain tomorrow. After all, he was the one who could give a name to the planet.

Lian’s informal log, day ninety-four of the expedition.
The captain decided to call the planet Blue Island. This was the name of a planet which has disappeared more than a thousand years before, in a supernova. We are still increasing our gravity. Our first readings of the planet confirmed the presence of a breathable atmosphere and bearable ground pressure and temperature. We are now checking biological signatures and astronomical data.

Lian’s informal log, day one-oh-four of the expedition.
Our first readings are completed. We have spotted carbon-based life forms in the oceans that cover three quarters of Blue Island’s surface. They are primitive beings, such as bacteria, algae and small boneless animals. Thalia told us that was an early stage in a planet’s life growth. The evolution has not yet created rigid rods and bones which are essential for organisms to live out of water. That’s why no forests have been spotted. Yet, those life forms have already influenced the atmospheric composition. We are waiting for the results of the astronomical simulation.

I got to bed the next evening confident in the navigator’s ability to predict the planet and satellites moves. If all was right, we would send a landing party to collect samples and assess the illness risks. I looked at Teebow who was already asleep in his hammock. He almost worked twenty hours a day despite the medical officer’s advice. The captain had to threaten not to let him land on the planet if he was too tired to make him take some rest. This planet was fascinating him. I put my notepad in the hammock pocket and rolled up to sleep, and the light automatically switched off.
The next morning, as I went to the control room, I met Carl Faejtylo, our shift’s navigator, who looked tired and preoccupied.
‘Galaxy be your guide Carl!’
‘Space be your garden Lian.’
‘What’s going on, you look as if you were to meet the Great Kraantreck?’ I asked, joking.
‘We have…trouble, with the simulation.’
‘What’s the matter with that?’
‘This planet and its satellites are a chaotic system. In addition to the three astronomic bodies gravity problem which is, as you may know, already insoluble, each satellite has its own magnetic field and inner activity which influence and are influenced by the planet and the other satellites. The important amount of liquid water on the planet also make the problem more difficult because of massive tidal flows.’
‘This sounds like a brain killing machine!’
‘I’m going to check this night’s simulation results with Wiat, so if you’ve nothing else to do, you may take a look at this.’
Wiat Quely, the third navigator, was sitting at his post in the control room. The captain and the second officer were talking with him. It appeared that the simple presence of Solar Wind and its magnetic field disturbed the experiments because of the system inherent instability. The simulation results were too scattered to be useful. The planetary system was just unpredictable. Nevertheless, the captain decided to send a landing party. If the situation of the ship changed, we could just move her for a moment and come and retrieve the party later. The first officer would lead and the captain would stay on board.
‘The captain should always be the last to leave his ship!’ he said. They began planning the landing party.
Go to 9.

normalement là il y avait un choix entre rester et descendre sur la planête, mais il y a eu productor's cut. evil cry

Enfin, si je m'y était mis plus tôt ça ne serait pas arrivé :roll:
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